editing: -fixed the bodice (too strong, not feminine enough) by creating a sort of sweet-heart neckline -liked the sides of the gown aka the straps, so i incorporated that more -roses might have been unflattering, so i scaled them, and put them on the straps
details: a simple white gown (its white i promise, the blue is just to separate the gown from the croquis) with straps that criss-cross (some straps have roses on them, others have gems/rhinestones/embroidery some have both!); the bottom layer is the same; it's a sheer portion on top of the gown base
hope you like this one better
and yes, i will keep altering this until is 100% satisfied!
The roses especially look way nicer on this one, no offense